Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-bgp-session-culling-04

2017-09-20 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 21/09/2017 12:13, Matt Griswold wrote: > * Brian Carpenter [170918 21:44 -0700]: >> Minor Issues: >> - >> >>> 3.1.1. Maintenance Considerations >>> >>> Initiators of the administrative shutdown could consider using >>> Graceful Shutdown [I-D.ietf-grow-bgp-gshut] to facilitate smo

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-experimentation-05

2017-09-20 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Thanks David. That completely responds to my comments. Regards Brian On 21/09/2017 10:45, Black, David wrote: > Brian, > > I'm about to post the -06 version of this draft. The concern on RFC 3168 > impact of the ECN nonce removal was resolved by listing the four major > changes (and you w

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-bgp-session-culling-04

2017-09-20 Thread Matt Griswold
* Brian Carpenter [170918 21:44 -0700]: > Minor Issues: > - > > > 3.1.1. Maintenance Considerations > > > > Initiators of the administrative shutdown could consider using > > Graceful Shutdown [I-D.ietf-grow-bgp-gshut] to facilitate smooth > > drainage of traffic prior to session

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-experimentation-05

2017-09-20 Thread Black, David
Brian, I'm about to post the -06 version of this draft. The concern on RFC 3168 impact of the ECN nonce removal was resolved by listing the four major changes (and you were correct that the change to Section 20.2 is subtle - I got it wrong on my first attempt in responding to your email). He

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-spinosa-urn-lex-11

2017-09-20 Thread Enrico Francesconi
Dear Dale, thanks for your remarks. As they are very sensitive in the on-going discussion, we send you and the other reviewers some considerations about them, in order to clarify our approach in the URN:LEX proposal. URN:LEX has been conceived to cope with two main objectives: - sources of la

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-20 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 9/20/17 5:57 AM, Alexey Melnikov wrote: Since there is an IANA registry, another possibility would be to not attempt to revise the syntax from 5322 at all. On my memory most of new header fields are defined without extending "optional-field" production. So people are already doing what yo

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-service-model-explained-03

2017-09-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informati

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

2017-09-20 Thread Stewart Bryant
Thanks for doing the update. - Stewart On 20/09/2017 15:00, Dave Cridland wrote: shakespeare.example is a fine domain to use - the XMPP community (mostly due to Peter Saint-Andre) has used these inventive domains to express examples with more clarity - montague.lit, capulet.lit, and so on pr

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

2017-09-20 Thread Dave Cridland
shakespeare.example is a fine domain to use - the XMPP community (mostly due to Peter Saint-Andre) has used these inventive domains to express examples with more clarity - montague.lit, capulet.lit, and so on provide usefully recognisable domains. But .example is just as good as .lit, and just as c

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

2017-09-20 Thread Steve Kille
Stewart, These Shakespearean style addresses are conventionally used in XMPP XEPs, and I followed that style here. I've discussed with XMPP colleagues, and we agree that although the convention is cool, you are right that a safe address should be used. I have fixed this in 06, which I just sub

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

2017-09-20 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

2017-09-20 Thread Alexey Melnikov
Hi Paul, > On 19 Sep 2017, at 21:02, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > >> On 9/19/17 2:41 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: >> On 19 Sep 2017, at 9:23, Alexey Melnikov wrote: >>optional-field =/ *( approved / >>archive / >>control / >>distribution / >>expire

[Gen-art] R: Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-alt-mark-10

2017-09-20 Thread Fioccola Giuseppe
Hi Linda, Thank you for your considerations. Please see my answers inline tagged as [GF]. Best Regards, Giuseppe -Messaggio originale- Da: Linda Dunbar [mailto:linda.dun...@huawei.com] Inviato: mercoledì 20 settembre 2017 00:23 A: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ippm-alt-