[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-trickle-ice-sip-12

2018-01-23 Thread Dale Worley
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06

2018-01-23 Thread Weijun Wang
I've uploaded an updated version at http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~weijun/rfc5653bis/draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-07.html before submitting a new I-D draft. This page shows all keywords in color (gray for lowercase, red for uppercase), hopefully this will be easy for everyone to review.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-06

2018-01-23 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Thanks Francis! Acee On 1/23/18, 5:55 PM, "Francis Dupont" wrote: Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-06

2018-01-23 Thread Francis Dupont
Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pim-source-discovery-bsr-08

2018-01-23 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06

2018-01-23 Thread Alissa Cooper
Joel, thanks for your review. I think the WG will need to review the changes to make sure people agree with which keywords become capitalized. I’m holding a DISCUSS about that. Alissa > On Jan 2, 2018, at 10:48 PM, Weijun Wang wrote: > > Thanks for the suggestion.

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-10

2018-01-23 Thread Alissa Cooper
Elwyn, thanks for your thorough review. I referenced it in my No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jan 18, 2018, at 1:00 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Almost Ready > > [This is a Last Call Review, not a telechat review]. > > I am the

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-eddsa-04

2018-01-23 Thread Alissa Cooper
Christer, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Nov 18, 2017, at 2:59 AM, Christer Holmberg > wrote: > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The