[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-13

2018-05-01 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more i

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-05-01 Thread John C Klensin
Robert, To save time, let me response to a few of the questions you raise. (Peter, feel free to plagiarize.) --On Tuesday, May 1, 2018 11:35 -0700 Robert Sparks wrote: > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Issues >... > Document: draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00 > Reviewer

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-05-01 Thread Peter Saint-Andre
On 5/1/18 12:35 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these com

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-05-01 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-09

2018-05-01 Thread Robert Sparks
Sorry for not seeing your earlier response (and for not spotting the change in the diff correctly). Yes, this change is sufficient to address my comments. RjS On 5/1/18 11:15 AM, Huangyihong (Rachel) wrote: Hi Robert, I believe I have responded you in February, if you check the mail archi

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-09

2018-05-01 Thread Huangyihong (Rachel)
Hi Robert, I believe I have responded you in February, if you check the mail archive of xrblock. Follows was my response before. And I uploaded a new version to reflect that since I didn't get your further email. Sorry for assuming that you received my response. " Hi Robert, Thanks

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-09

2018-05-01 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a n

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-05-01 Thread Ole Troan
Brian, >>> 4. Section 4 - It would be good to capitalize Standards Action, and refer to >>> RFC 8126 as reference (also to be added) >> >> Capitalisation done. >> I ended up leaning towards not referencing 8126. As most documents with IANA >> considerations don't. To be consistent. > > Really?