Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 6/4/18 5:39 AM, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: The document write-up describes the process that has been used with SCTP updates, and this document follows this plan - this is information to help the WG prepare a bis document, that we plan to populate with these edits to the spec and adopt as a WG i

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-06-04 Thread Peter Saint-Andre
Hi Robert, thanks for checking. Although I tend to agree with you about 2119 language, as I understand the intent of the author (and of the community of practice that uses national bibliography numbers) is for this document (as RFC 3188 before it) to define how NBNs are used in the field. Peter

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-06-04 Thread Robert Sparks
Thanks Peter! The editorial pass looks really good. It let me spot a nit I missed before: at " necessary, a resource in outdated file format is migrated into a more" you probably want "in an outdated file format" In that paragraph, you added some MAYs that go against my first original point,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Spencer Dawkins at IETF
Just chiming in as AD ... On Mon, Jun 4, 2018 at 7:18 AM Christer Holmberg < christer.holmb...@ericsson.com> wrote: > Hi, > > >>> The information in this document does not update RFC4640 or the Errata > >>> to that specification. The document is instead provided as input to > >>> preparation of

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-06-04 Thread Peter Saint-Andre
Robert, some fixes were posted over the weekend - if you have a chance, please check the diff here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-01.txt Thanks! Peter On 5/1/18 12:35 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Issues > >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi, >>> The information in this document does not update RFC4640 or the Errata >>> to that specification. The document is instead provided as input to >>> preparation of a new document that is expected to be a standards-track >>> replacement for RFC4960. If approved, the replacement document will

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Hi On 04/06/2018 11:13, Christer Holmberg wrote: Hi Gorry, ... The information in this document does not update RFC4640 or the Errata to that specification. The document is instead provided as input to preparation of a new document that is expected to be a standards-track replacement for RFC

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Christer Holmberg
Not a comment on the document, but a question/suggestion: If you want to have a place holder for changes to be done in the bis (which seems to be the main purpose of the errata document), why not create a GitHub repo for the bis, and then document everything as GitHub issues? Then, when you start

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi Gorry, ... >The information in this document does not update RFC4640 or the Errata >to that specification. The document is instead provided as input to >preparation of a new document that is expected to be a standards-track >replacement for RFC4960. If approved, the replacement document will

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Hi Christer, As document shepherd for this SCTP process, I'll have a first go at responding. I think that for RFC4960 the Errata as filed still apply. See below. The document authors can of course also propose answers to these questions Gorry On 04/06/2018 10:17, Christer Holmberg wrot

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Christer Holmberg
Re-sent due to wrong e-mail address. > >Hi, > >I have also looked at this document, and there are things that I have >think are unclear: > >Q1: It is Informational, and it does not update RFC 4960. Instead, it just >seems to list the erratas (but without even referencing them, as noted by >Paul).

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi, I have also looked at this document, and there are things that I have think are unclear: Q1: It is Informational, and it does not update RFC 4960. Instead, it just seems to list the erratas (but without even referencing them, as noted by Paul). I think that it should be made very clear that