[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03

2018-10-08 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, pleas

Re: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10

2018-10-08 Thread Linlin Zhou
Dear Stewart, Thanks for your review. Please see my feedbacks below. Regards, Linlin Linlin Zhou From: Stewart Bryant Date: 2018-10-09 00:52 To: gen-art@ietf.org CC: draft-ietf-regext-org.all; ietf; regext Subject: [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10 Reviewer: Stewart

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-campbell-sip-messaging-smime-03

2018-10-08 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10

2018-10-08 Thread Adam Roach
On 10/8/18 11:52 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote: The RFC 2718 normative reference is a bit strange to one that does not normally work in this area. Thanks! This is a good catch of a character transposition. The correct reference here should be RFC 2781 rather than RFC 2718. While this is still tech

[Gen-art] Non-ASCII in documents (was Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases-18)

2018-10-08 Thread Adam Roach
[speaking with my RSOC hat on] On 10/4/18 1:02 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: Throughout 3.1.1, 6.1.2, 7.3, 7.4: I presume "###us" is meant to be "###µs". I believe I-Ds are now allowed to have such characters. To be clear, I-Ds are currently prevented from being submitted with non-ASCII characters

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10

2018-10-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For m

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00

2018-10-08 Thread Alissa Cooper
Robert, thanks for your review. I have entered a Yes ballot. Alissa > On Sep 20, 2018, at 5:53 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-too-many-reqs-04

2018-10-08 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informati

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases-18

2018-10-08 Thread Grossman, Ethan A.
Hi Pete, Executive summary: I have determined that "µ" is not accepted in I-Ds so I did not implement your requested change to that effect. Details below. If you find evidence to the contrary please let me know. Thanks, Ethan. Details: Regarding "I presume "###us" is meant to be "###µs". I bel