[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane-12

2019-12-09 Thread Brian Carpenter via Datatracker
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review result: Ready with Issues Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane-12 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-09 Thread MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)
> -Original Message- > From: ippm [mailto:ippm-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Benjamin Kaduk > Sent: Monday, December 9, 2019 4:28 PM > To: MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) > Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ippm- > metric-registry@ietf.org > Subject: Re:

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-certificate-compression-07

2019-12-09 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-09 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
On Mon, Dec 09, 2019 at 09:22:53PM +, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) wrote: > Thanks Roni! > > I'm glad you took this on, the long sets of comments/DISCUSS > from Benjamin kept me very busy while I was flying > again - literally all day on Sunday to reach Kona, HI. > You'll see those replies after I

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-09 Thread MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)
Thanks Roni! I'm glad you took this on, the long sets of comments/DISCUSS from Benjamin kept me very busy while I was flying again - literally all day on Sunday to reach Kona, HI. You'll see those replies after I sort-out a few more details today, also Magnus' DISCUSS. It seemed as though

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-09 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Al, Here are the proposed changes for the -22 version. See if they make sense Section 3 bullet 1 has RFC change (up to and including the publication of one or more RFCs or I-Ds describing it) to (up to and including the publication of one or more immutable document such as an RFC)