[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06

2020-05-11 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13

2020-05-11 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Elwyn, On 5/11/20, 2:10 PM, "Elwyn Davies" wrote: Hi, Peter. In the light of some of your responses here, I would just like to clarify that one of the reasons for gen-art reviews is to try and make extremely complicated technical documents more accessible for those who

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13

2020-05-11 Thread Peter Psenak
Hi Elwyn, please see inline (##PP) On 11/05/2020 19:37, Elwyn Davies wrote: Hi, Peter. In the light of some of your responses here, I would just like to clarify that one of the reasons for gen-art reviews is to try and make extremely complicated technical documents more accessible for those w

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13

2020-05-11 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi, Peter. In the light of some of your responses here, I would just like to clarify that one of the reasons for gen-art reviews is to try and make extremely complicated technical documents more accessible for those who are not as deeply embedded in the jargon and technicalities of the subjec