Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-05

2020-08-03 Thread Jim Schaad
-Original Message- From: Linda Dunbar via Datatracker Sent: Monday, August 3, 2020 5:38 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; c...@ietf.org Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-05 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-date-tag-05

2020-08-03 Thread Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-12

2020-08-03 Thread Benjamin Kaduk
That seems reasonable to me. Ludwig, are you able to raise the topic on the ACE list? Thanks, Ben On Mon, Aug 03, 2020 at 02:21:12PM +, Seitz Ludwig wrote: > I support Steffi's suggestion (i.e. make it pop-only here and allow non-pop > profiles in the framework). > > /Ludwig > >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-12

2020-08-03 Thread Seitz Ludwig
I support Steffi's suggestion (i.e. make it pop-only here and allow non-pop profiles in the framework). /Ludwig -Original Message- From: Stefanie Gerdes Sent: den 3 augusti 2020 16:18 To: Seitz Ludwig ; Benjamin Kaduk ; Paul Kyzivat Cc: draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-12

2020-08-03 Thread Stefanie Gerdes
Hi all, On 08/03/2020 08:21 AM, Seitz Ludwig wrote: * Also in section 3.3.1: ... This specification assumes that the access token is a PoP token as described in [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] unless specifically stated otherwise. Since no

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-12

2020-08-03 Thread Seitz Ludwig
> >> * Also in section 3.3.1: > >> > >> ... This > >> specification assumes that the access token is a PoP token as > >> described in [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] unless specifically stated > >> otherwise. > >> > >> I think "assumes ... unless" should be "MUST ... unless". > > >