Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06

2020-12-02 Thread Jakob Heitz (jheitz)
Dale, Sorry for not responding directly to your email. Your concerns were addressed in -07 and more so in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-08 Regards, Jakob. -Original Message- From: Dale Worley via Datatracker Sent: Monday, July 13, 2020 8:33 PM To:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-19

2020-12-02 Thread Alissa Cooper
Gyan, thanks for your review. Keyur, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Nov 13, 2020, at 4:47 PM, Gyan Mishra wrote: > > > Thank you for the responses. > > I am all set for the document advancement. > > Gyan > On Fri, Nov 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM Keyur

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06

2020-12-02 Thread Alissa Cooper
Christer, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Oct 1, 2020, at 8:51 AM, Balázs Varga A > wrote: > > Hi Christer, > > Thanks for the review. I agree with all your comments and will be corrected > in next version. In detail:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-recovery-32

2020-12-02 Thread Lucas Pardue
Hi Vijay, Thanks for the review! Since the QUIC WG uses a Github Workflow I've created a separate issue for each of the items in your review, see in-line responses for the precise issue link. All issues are track in the milestone https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/milestone/22 We'd appreciate

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11

2020-12-02 Thread Ines Robles via Datatracker
Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-grasp-api-08

2020-12-02 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Brian, On 12/1/20 8:13 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: Hi Paul, Comments in line. There's one definite good catch in your review, and obviously more clarifications are needed. I'll comment this one last time. Then I will be satisfied that I have communicated my thoughts, and I'm happy with

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-recovery-32

2020-12-02 Thread Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-http-32

2020-12-02 Thread Lucas Pardue
Hello As mentioned previously, review comments raised during the genart http review were captured as issues on the QUIC WG GitHub repository. These issues have been assessed by the document editor(s) and shepherd, please see each individual issue for more-specific discussion. As a summary, the

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-32

2020-12-02 Thread Lucas Pardue
Hello, As mentioned previously, review comments raised during the genart transport review were captured as issues on the QUIC WG GitHub repository. These issues have been assessed by the document editor(s) and shepherd, please see each individual issue for more-specific discussion. As a summary,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer0-types-07

2020-12-02 Thread Alissa Cooper
Theresa, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Sep 27, 2020, at 6:09 PM, Theresa Enghardt via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Theresa Enghardt > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team