[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-21 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

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2022-09-21 Thread Jean Mahoney via Datatracker
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: For telechat 2022-10-06 Reviewer Type LC end Draft Tim Evens Last Call 2022-09-16 draft-ietf-dots-robust-blocks-05 Last calls: Reviewer Type LC end Draft Elwyn Davies Last

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-l2bundles-06

2022-09-21 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Paul, On 9/20/22, 1:42 PM, "Paul Kyzivat" wrote: Ketan, On 9/20/22 10:30 AM, Ketan Talaulikar wrote: > 1) NIT: 1 Introduction > > IDNITS reports: > > -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. > 'IEEE802.1AX'

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-l2bundles-06

2022-09-21 Thread Ketan Talaulikar
< adding the WG alias and our AD > Hi Paul, Thanks for the discussion. I will summarize the two points as follows: 1) Should the reference to [IEEE802.1AX] be informative? It is currently normative. The context is covered in draft-kucherawy-bcp97bis-02. We will wait for guidance from our

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-l2bundles-06

2022-09-21 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Ketan, I've trimmed the conversation down to just the relevant points. On 9/21/22 10:07 AM, Ketan Talaulikar wrote: KT> This ID-nits warning is perhaps simply because the normative reference is not from an IETF publication and so perhaps the tool is not able to determine if that publication

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-07

2022-09-21 Thread Thomas Fossati
Hi Ketan, the updated document looks very good, thanks very much! Cheers, t On 21/09/2022, 15:19, "Ketan Talaulikar" wrote: Hi Thomas, The updated version just posted includes the changes we discussed: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-08 Thanks, Ketan

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-07

2022-09-21 Thread Ketan Talaulikar
Hi Thomas, The updated version just posted includes the changes we discussed: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-08 Thanks, Ketan On Tue, Sep 13, 2022 at 8:16 PM Thomas Fossati wrote: > Thank you Ketan. > > > > On 13/09/2022, 07:52, "Ketan Talaulikar"

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-l2bundles-06

2022-09-21 Thread Ketan Talaulikar
Hi Paul, Thanks for your quick reply and please check inline below for response. On Tue, Sep 20, 2022 at 11:11 PM Paul Kyzivat wrote: > Ketan, > > On 9/20/22 10:30 AM, Ketan Talaulikar wrote: > > > 1) NIT: 1 Introduction > > > > IDNITS reports: > > > > -- Possible downref: