[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc6874bis-02

2022-09-24 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-11

2022-09-24 Thread H Y
Hi Peter, Thank you for your very careful review. We modified the draft to address the comments, and you can see the diff here. https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-12 Please see inline. 2022年9月21日(水) 14:54 Peter Yee via Datatracker : > > Reviewer: Peter Yee >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc6874bis-02

2022-09-24 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Roni, Assuming "easy" means "ready", thank you! Regards Brian Carpenter On 24-Sep-22 19:31, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being p

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ipv6-deployment-07

2022-09-24 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-08

2022-09-24 Thread Shwetha Bhandari
Thank you for the detailed review and sorry for a very late response. I am creating a revision of the draft based on this feedback. Responses and clarifications inline @SB On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 1:39 AM Joel Halpern via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review res

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-08

2022-09-24 Thread Joel Halpern
Thank you for addressing my comments.  trimmed, responses where needed in line. Yours, Joel On 9/24/2022 10:01 PM, Shwetha Bhandari wrote: Thank you for the detailed review and sorry for a very late response. I am creating a revision of the draft based on this feedback. Responses and clarifi