[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

2022-09-29 Thread Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-l2bundles-06

2022-09-29 Thread Ketan Talaulikar
Hello All, I see that the IETF LC for this document is over and it is scheduled for the upcoming IESG telechat. I wanted to poll to see if there was any support or feedback for point (2) below and the IANA changes on the lines suggested by Paul. Thanks, Ketan On Wed, Sep 21, 2022 at 9:12 PM

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05

2022-09-29 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Don Fedyk
Hi Joel It was for this specific area it was requested. We did explore an automated/mechanical way of doing this but in the end, it was easier to do by hand. The organization of this MIB maps closely to the YANG model. In other cases, I have dealt with existing MIBs and new YANG this is not

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Joel Halpern
That suffices for the document and my review.  Whether it suffices for the community and IESG is up to them.  (I wonder about the precedent of defining MIBs for monitoring every new thing we do.  But that is up to others, not something you can fix in this document.) Yours, Joel On 9/29/2022

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Don Fedyk
Hi Joel The reason this was requested by the community is that there is SNMP management equipment deployed that they would like to be able use for monitoring IP-TFS. I suggest I add this text to clearify. OLD: The objects defined here are the same as [I-D.ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs] with the

[Gen-art] Review Assignments

2022-09-29 Thread Jean Mahoney via Datatracker
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: For telechat 2022-10-06 Reviewer Type LC end Draft Pete Resnick Last Call 2022-09-20 draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-11 For telechat 2022-10-20 Reviewer Type LC end Draft