Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-drip-auth-24

2022-10-13 Thread Stuart W. Card
Stu here, chiming in, primarily on those specific issues where Adam called me out. My comments are interspersed below and I have trimmed out any areas on which I have none. On 10/13/2022 3:06 PM, Adam Wiethuechter wrote: *From:* Matt Joras via Datatracker Reviewer: Matt Joras Review

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-13 Thread Robert Sparks
minor tweak On 10/13/22 4:44 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: At: "The mechanism for an operator to determine whether an ASCII string associate with a NF Type is unique across operators is outside the scope of this document" I suggest "string associate with" -> "string is associated

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-13 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Review Assignments

2022-10-13 Thread Jean Mahoney via Datatracker
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: For telechat 2022-10-27 Reviewer Type LC end Draft Pete Resnick Last Call 2022-10-07 draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-nbiot-12 Last calls: Reviewer Type LC end Draft Stewart Bryant Last

Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-drip-auth-24

2022-10-13 Thread Adam Wiethuechter
Matt, Thanks for your quick and detailed review. Some comments in line. -25 will be out in the next 24-hours making corrections based on your comments. Your comments on the use of Wrapper and Manifest are being fixed throughout the document and have been snipped from this reply. 73,

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10

2022-10-13 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more