[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-pam-06

Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-intarea-rfc7042bis-09

Hi Dale, Thanks for this review. See below. On Fri, Oct 6, 2023 at 4:05 PM Dale Worley via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Dale Worley > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents