Hi Mallory,
thank you for the review and your thoughtful comments that helped improve
the draft. Please find my notes below tagged GIM>>. Attached, is the
updated working version that includes changes addressing your comments.
Regards,
Greg
On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 12:58 PM Mallory Knodel via
Susan,
On 12/19/23 12:26 PM, Susan Hares wrote:
Jean and Peter:
Would you ask the BESS team if I can have until January 2^nd , 2024 to
finish this review? I would like to chat with my IDR chairs about the
review. I will get time either this Friday (12/22) or next Friday (12/29).
[JM] I
Jean and Peter:
Would you ask the BESS team if I can have until January 2nd, 2024 to finish
this review? I would like to chat with my IDR chairs about the review. I will
get time either this Friday (12/22) or next Friday (12/29).
This combined review may save Matthew a bit of time - as he
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits
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