Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cpe-slaac-renum-04

2020-09-09 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Interesting that the datatracker says the document is "Proposed Standard", but the document has "Intend status: Informational". The two should be made to agree. - Bernie > On Sep 9, 2020, at 8:45 PM, Fernando Gont wrote: > > Hello, Pete, > > Thanks a lot for your feedback! In-line > >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-mac-assign-06

2020-05-26 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Hi Roni: Sorry for the late response to this review. Thanks for doing it! >1. In the terminology section I was wondering why the client is a device while >the server is a software. Any reason for this distinction. I can easily replace both with "node" as that matches RFC8415: So: client

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-04

2018-09-12 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Hi. One comment (as DHC WG co-chair and shepherd). See inline below (BV>). Other comments/responses seem OK. - Bernie -Original Message- From: ianfar...@gmx.com Sent: Tuesday, September 11, 2018 7:42 AM To: Elwyn Davies Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt@ietf.

Re: [Gen-art] Your Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis

2018-04-07 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Hi: Regarding: >s21.22, 9th para after Table 36: s/The client SHOULD NOT send an IA Prefix >option with 0/The client SHOULD NOT send an IAPrefix option with 0/ [space >removed] The “IA Prefix” (and IA Address) are used throughout the document. The option is code is IAPREFIX, but the name of t

Re: [Gen-art] Your Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis

2018-04-06 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
I’ll update and put out a -13 over the weekend. s20.3, para 2: > This method MUST be supported by all protocols. This seems to be rather presumptious! I’ll fix this as it is supposed to ne all Authentication option protocols. - Bernie (from iPad) On Apr 6, 2018, at 7:29 PM, Elwyn Davies mailt

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-10

2018-01-19 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Elwyn: On behalf of the authors of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis, thanks much for the very thorough review (most of your comments look appropriate to apply). - Bernie -Original Message- From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com] Sent: Thursday, January 18, 2018 1:00 PM To: gen-art@i

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-privacy-03

2016-02-16 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
, February 16, 2016 4:39 AM To: Bernie Volz (volz) ; Robert Sparks ; Tomek Mrugalski ; General Area Review Team ; i...@ietf.org; dh...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-privacy@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-privacy-03 Bernie, On 02/15/2016 06:37 PM, B

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-privacy-03

2016-02-15 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Perhaps we should get away from whether something is easy or difficult to implement or whether the algorithm may be more (or less) efficient. I think the point of this material is to ENCOURAGE random assignment rather than sequential to improve privacy- so keep it at that. Let implementers worry

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-03

2013-08-25 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
We are in the process of re-chartering. (Whether this document is included in that new charter will depend on timing as it would be unnecessary to include it if it is already 'done'.) The draft proposed rechartering (which has some minor updates since then), is at http://datatracker.ietf.org/d

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] RE : Gen-art review: draft-ietf-dhc-triggered-reconfigure-05

2013-04-29 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
ally broken. But I don't really see this as a big issue and the "must" is the lower-case variant anyway. - Bernie -Original Message- From: Robert Sparks [mailto:rjspa...@nostrum.com] Sent: Monday, April 29, 2013 9:45 AM To: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com Cc: Bernie Volz (volz

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] RE : Gen-art review: draft-ietf-dhc-triggered-reconfigure-05

2013-04-26 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Robert: The reason to allow this is that otherwise client A will be unnecessarily reconfigured many times. (It is also possible that a client might Renew on its own just as this is happening and thus it can also be removed from the Reconfigure.) I think the text should be cleaned up to indicat

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

2009-04-15 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
-Original Message- From: Scott Brim [mailto:s...@employees.org] Sent: Wednesday, April 15, 2009 4:52 PM To: Ted Lemon Cc: Ralph Droms (rdroms); Bernie Volz (volz); dhc WG; gen-art@ietf.org; black_da...@emc.com; i...@ietf.org; mif Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

Re: [Gen-art] [mif] [dhcwg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

2009-04-15 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Son [mailto:g...@rim.com] Sent: Wednesday, April 15, 2009 9:53 AM To: Ted Lemon; Ralph Droms (rdroms) Cc: mif; i...@ietf.org; black_da...@emc.com; dhc WG; gen-art@ietf.org; Bernie Volz (volz) Subject: RE: [mif] [dhcwg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00 I think Ted pointed out ver

Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

2009-04-13 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
While this is certainly an interesting point, I don't really see that it is specific to the container option or that the container option adds any new or different issues? I don't see why this would hold up this draft (perhaps it is not holding it up)? Perhaps at most some statement(s) about the i

[Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-ddns-resolution and draft-ietf-dnsext-dhcid-rr

2005-11-28 Thread Bernie Volz \(volz\)
t; From: Harald Tveit Alvestrand [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Monday, November 28, 2005 10:02 AM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Mark Stapp (mjs); > [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Bernie Volz (volz); > Ralph Droms (rdroms); [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Sam Hartman &