[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-25

2024-06-04 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Behcet, Thanks for your review On Mon, May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews al

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-pcecc-use-cases-15

2024-05-28 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Sue, Thanks for your review. On Fri, May 24, 2024 at 12:32 AM Susan Hares via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Susan Hares > Review result: Ready with Issues > > GEN-ART review > > Status: Ready with Issues > Type of issues: Technical issues + Editorial issues > > General C

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-02

2023-12-11 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Christer, On Tue, Dec 12, 2023 at 1:05 AM Russ Housley wrote: > Hi Christer. > > >> Section 2.3 of RFC 8446 explains that the security provided to early > data is > >> weaker than > >> the security provided to other kinds of TLS data. This is the reason > that > >> PCEPS MUST NOT > >> make u

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-association-diversity-10

2019-10-30 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Alissa, An update has been posted that makes changes based on the genart review by the authors - https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-association-diversity-10&url2=draft-ietf-pce-association-diversity-12 A response to the Dale's email discussing these changes is pending. Dhruv O

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-lsp-control-request-08

2019-09-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Francesca, Thanks for your review. Few thoughts... On Mon, Aug 26, 2019 at 5:44 PM Francesca Palombini via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Francesca Palombini > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) re

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-path-protection-08

2019-08-29 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Pete, Thanks for your review and nits. Just snipping to two points... > OLD > | PT | Path Protection Association Flags |S|P| > NEW > | PT |Unassigned |S|P| > I feel it is important to keep the name "flags" in the figure t

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10

2019-08-27 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Erik, Thank you for your review and suggestions. We will update in the next revision. Thanks! Dhruv On Wed, Aug 28, 2019 at 7:28 AM Erik Kline via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Erik Kline > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General A

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-11

2019-08-21 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Paul, Thanks for your review, please see inline... On Tue, Aug 20, 2019 at 9:58 PM Paul Kyzivat wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-association-group-09

2019-06-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Meral, Thanks for your review. > Nits/editorial comments: > > It could help to clarify if this proposal brings any new requirements on > existing LSP OAM/path protection techniques, or brings the need for > extensions. Associating LSPs together to form a association group in the context of

Re: [Gen-art] [Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-exp-codepoints-04

2017-12-27 Thread Dhruv Dhody
how they parse >and process the messages, objects, and TLVs in case they come, >accidentally, from another experiment. > > There are a few words in https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6709#section-5 > that might also be relevant. An experimental code point is in effect a > protoco

Re: [Gen-art] [Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-rfc6006bis-03

2017-08-21 Thread Dhruv Dhody
ks? Regards, Dhruv Working copy: https://github.com/dhruvdhody-huawei/ietf/blob/master/draft-ietf-pce-rfc6006bis-04.txt > -Original Message- > From: Roni Even > Sent: 19 August 2017 19:51 > To: Dhruv Dhody ; Roni Even > ; gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-pce-rfc

Re: [Gen-art] [Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-rfc6006bis-03

2017-08-17 Thread Dhruv Dhody
gt; Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. In section 4.2 I am not sure why is this sentence there, is it for the > current yang document or for a future one. Why have it at all?-"The PCEP > YANG module [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-yang] can be extended to also include t

Re: [Gen-art] [Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pceps-14

2017-08-03 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Dale, > -Original Message- > From: Dale R. Worley [mailto:wor...@ariadne.com] > Sent: 02 August 2017 08:10 > To: Dhruv Dhody > Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-pce-pceps@ietf.org; p...@ietf.org; > i...@ietf.org; dhruv.i...@gmail.com > Subject: Re: [

Re: [Gen-art] [Pce] Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-18

2017-02-17 Thread Dhruv Dhody
interpretation it can, in some cases[1]. I would let the authors confirm on this. Thanks, Dhruv [1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/pce/bexK_Nc2wHgQzV-XUC8lqMec8zY > -Original Message- > From: Joel M. Halpern [mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com] > Sent: 17 February 2017 10:13 > To:

Re: [Gen-art] [Pce] Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-18

2017-02-16 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Joel, Regarding your comment - > Is the intention to prohibit the driving > of LSP creation from the PCE? This capability is described in - https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-07 (document expired recently, authors should refresh it) Thanks, Dhruv > -Origin

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-iro-update-06

2016-04-18 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Peter, Thanks for the diligent review! See Inline... On Mon, Apr 18, 2016 at 1:40 AM, Peter Yee wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please wait for di

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03

2015-11-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Thanks Brian! Thanks Pavan! Happy Diwali :) On Fri, Nov 13, 2015 at 11:16 AM, Brian E Carpenter < brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > On 13/11/2015 18:25, Vishnu Pavan Beeram wrote: > > Brian, Hi! > > > > Please see inline (prefixed [VPB]) > > > > Regards, > > -Pavan (as the Document S

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03

2015-11-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Brian, Let me apologies again for keeping you waiting for a reply. The reply to this would be the same as "Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03" sent today. We can continue the discussion on that thread? Regards, Dhruv On Sat, Nov 7, 2015 at 3:55 AM, Brian

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03

2015-11-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody
​ Hi Brian, Thanks for your review and sorry for the delay in the reply [ Diwali festivities in these neck of woods :) ] Please see inline... On Fri, Nov 13, 2015 at 9:12 AM, Brian E Carpenter < brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

2015-11-02 Thread Dhruv Dhody
t and IANA review changes so far. Regards, Dhruv > -Original Message- > From: Julien Meuric [mailto:julien.meu...@orange.com] > Sent: 03 November 2015 00:57 > To: Dhruv Dhody; Joel Halpern Direct; Dhruv Dhody > Cc: A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-pc

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

2015-11-02 Thread Dhruv Dhody
IGP area is to be excluded. I have attached the working copy diff for easy reference. Regards, Dhruv > -Original Message- > From: Dhruv Dhody > Sent: 02 November 2015 00:33 > To: 'Julien Meuric'; Joel Halpern Direct; Dhruv Dhody > Cc: A. Jean Mahoney; Genera

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

2015-11-01 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi All, Sorry for delay in replying, let me try to send you proposed text tomorrow as per Julien's suggestion! Regards, Dhruv > -Original Message- > From: Julien Meuric [mailto:julien.meu...@orange.com] > Sent: 31 October 2015 00:35 > To: Joel Halpern Direct; Dh

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

2015-10-30 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Joel, Thanks for a review. See inline... On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 2:42 AM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these com