Re: [Gen-art] [tsvwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-19

2021-02-16 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Thanks Joel for these helpful comments. We think these issues could be addressed with a small number of additional clarifications, see below: On 15/02/2021 22:46, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer fo

Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-19 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
One minor nit on the new text, the term "controlled environment" is used elsewhere in the RFC series in transport-related documents to describe what you name "constrained environment". Gorry On 19/06/2020 16:02, Mark Allman wrote: I just posted a new version of rto-consider (-16). The docume

Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-18 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
See a few comments (marked GF) from the perspective of other transport RFCs, in case this helps you find text... Forwarded Message Subject: Re: [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14 Date: Thu, 18 Jun 2020 11:00:15 +0100 From: Stewart Bryant

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-08 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
I agree, see below. On 07/06/2020 18:11, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: On Sat, Jun 06, 2020 at 08:19:52AM +0100, Gorry Fairhurst wrote: Please see below. On 05/06/2020 17:43, Mark Allman wrote: = (3) Each time the RTO is used to detect a loss, the value of the RTO MUST

Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

2020-06-06 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Please see below. On 05/06/2020 17:43, Mark Allman wrote: Hi Stewart! Thanks for the feedback. Sorry for the long RTT. I had a recent deadline and am now trying to dig out. Major issues: As far as I can see this text only applies to exchanges between applications and network support applic

Re: [Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-15.txt

2020-03-12 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Thanks for your review! We will act on this and another detailed review of NiTs, and expect to make a new revision in a few days. Sorry for adding to your pain - being careful to work as an early pilot for the new document format has probably left us continuing with more NiTs than we should ha

Re: [Gen-art] [rmcat] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-eval-test-08

2019-02-08 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
I commented at the WG meeting, and would like to add a few comments here: On 07/02/2019 13:27, Zaheduzzaman Sarker wrote: Hi Stewart, Thanks for a good review. For the security consideration section, we can use stronger words if that is required. This document merely specifies test cases when

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-alternativebackoff-ecn-09

2018-08-17 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Thanks Russ - I believe we will deal with all these in the next revision, Gorry On 17/08/2018, 19:17, Russ Housley wrote: Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being proce

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-07 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
+1, as Chair. I see we have caused a little confusion here - The WG will not repeat this list of changes again as a part of the new .bis document. There could always be potentially be further changes as the .bis document passes through the WG - of course - but we'd rather expect this spec is m

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Hi On 04/06/2018 11:13, Christer Holmberg wrote: Hi Gorry, ... The information in this document does not update RFC4640 or the Errata to that specification. The document is instead provided as input to preparation of a new document that is expected to be a standards-track replacement for RFC

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

2018-06-04 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Hi Christer, As document shepherd for this SCTP process, I'll have a first go at responding. I think that for RFC4960 the Errata as filed still apply. See below. The document authors can of course also propose answers to these questions Gorry On 04/06/2018 10:17, Christer Holmberg wrot

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dccp-simul-open-08.txt

2009-05-22 Thread Gorry Fairhurst
Miguel A. Garcia wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version