Hi Francis,
Thanks for your review and comments. In discussing the comment resolution
process with Adrian, he suggests that I work directly with the commenter
to resolve any issues. Please note my in-line comments below and let me
know your thoughts.
BTW, I am not sure if I will be drafting
Hi Nicolas,
I believe this comment has already been mitigated. Peter was nice enough
to review the draft quickly and noted HVAC, K-12 and Elevator as US
centric terminology. Adrian discussed this and I believe resolved the
comment.
I have received some other comments in other areas of the dr
