Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07

2021-01-30 Thread Ned Freed
I'm having a little difficulty following the discussion of the text, so I took a look at the text itself. It currently (-07) says: The rule emoji_sequence is inherited from [Emoji-Seq]. It permits one or more bytes to form a single presentation image. The rule base-emojis MAY be used as

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-imapmove-command-02

2012-11-21 Thread Ned Freed
Hi, Kathleen, and thanks for the review. You left the document shepherd and one of the editors off of the distribution list, so I'm adding them in here. Because of that, I'm not doing the trimming that I'd normally do in my inline reply. Thanks. ... Section 3.3, paragraph 6: remove

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-imapmove-command-02

2012-11-21 Thread Ned Freed
Section 3.3 third paragraph: NOT and neither form a double negative, the phrase should use either instead of neither: The server MUST NOT leave a message in either mailbox Absolutely not! The double negative is quite necessary and intentional. One possible outcome if the MOVE of a

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Ned Freed
Minor issues: 1.It is not clear from the draft what the use case for using the group construct is. Section 3 talks about the issues with using the group construct and recommend limited use, but this is the only information. The main driver for this work is to add support for EAI

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Ned Freed
On 10/17/2012 10:49 AM, ned+i...@mauve.mrochek.com wrote: Minor issues: 1. It is not clear from the draft what the use case for using the group construct is. Section 3 talks about the issues with using the group construct and recommend limited use, but this is the only information.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Ned Freed
--On Wednesday, October 17, 2012 12:00 -0700 ned+i...@mauve.mrochek.com wrote: A single sentence summarizing what benefit is achieved with the change, along with a couple of usage examples, would go a long way towards showing how this update helps in practical ways. I could live

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Ned Freed
On 10/17/2012 2:32 PM, Ned Freed wrote: Channeling my inner Maslow, I see the present text as best, an additional sentence or two as next best, a sentence and a cite to the downgrade doc next in line, and including actual EAI examples in this doc as the worst choice. The problem I have

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Ned Freed
Channeling my inner Maslow, I see the present text as best, an additional sentence or two as next best, a sentence and a cite to the downgrade doc next in line, and including actual EAI examples in this doc as the worst choice. The problem I have with the current text is that it says

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-simpledowngrade-07

2012-09-20 Thread Ned Freed
On 09/19/2012 04:24 AM, Ben Campbell wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-media-type-regs-10.txt

2012-06-04 Thread Ned Freed
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

2011-10-23 Thread Ned Freed
On 10/20/2011 3:37 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: So, if the limit is still 998, then there is no change with respect the former limit. See the next sentence: (Note that in ASCII octets and characters are effectively the same but this is not true in UTF-8.) Remember, in UTF-8, characters

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-freed-sieve-notary-07

2010-04-05 Thread Ned Freed
Document: draft-freed-sieve-notary-07 Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins Review Date: 2010-04-05 IESG Telechat date: 2010-04-08 Summary: This draft is roughly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I found one minor problem which MIGHT just be a cut-and-paste error, but someone needs to look at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-freed-sieve-in-xml-05

2009-08-18 Thread Ned Freed
On Aug 16, 2009, at 11:01 AM, Ned Freed wrote: [...] it would be helpful to have a sentence or two somewhere (maybe in the intro) to explicitly say so. My confusion might be around the meaning of the term client in this context. No, I think your confusion is that you read a lot more

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Belated LC review of draft-freed-sieve-ihave-03

2008-12-11 Thread Ned Freed
(IETF list removed from cc list) Comments: A few minor nits that should not block anything: -- Is this a sieve wg submission or and individual submission? The title looks like an individual, but it's listed as a wg submission in the datatracker. (The answer to this does not change my

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-freed-sieve-date-index-11

2008-05-24 Thread Ned Freed
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-freed-sieve-environment-04.txt

2008-03-30 Thread Ned Freed
Hi Ned, On 2008-03-28 14:55, Ned Freed wrote: For domain, host and remote-host, since sieve strings are UTF-8, are these items expressed in UTF-8 or in ACE encoding? ACE encoding, of course. Nor do I believe this is worth calling out in this context. Domains and hosts appear