Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more information
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-dctcp-07
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2017-06-17
IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-15
IESG Telechat date: 2017-06-22
Summary: This draft is ready for publication with nits:
Section 3.2
"... an implementation may choose
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-isis-mi-bis-02
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2017-04-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-14
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: This draft is ready for publication.
The document is very well organized and clearly written. M
ir documents, so I
leave it to your community.
Thanks,
Orit.
-Original Message-
From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) [mailto:ginsb...@cisco.com]
Sent: Thursday, April 13, 2017 8:06 PM
To: Orit Levin ; gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-isis-mi-bis@tools.ietf.org
Subject: RE
lace "non-zero IID" with "non-zero instance".
4) Par 5 NOTE, replace "IID #0" with "standard instance".
Section 2.6.2
Replace all four appearances of "IID #0" with "standard instance".
Section 3.1
Replace the two "MAY&qu
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-isis-mi-bis-02
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2017-04-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-07
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13
Summary: This draft is "ready with issues" for publication.
Major issues: None.
Minor issu
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2017-02-13
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication. I only suggest adding the
a
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-05
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2017-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-03
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is well-written and well organized. It is basically ready for
publication, b
bac-06
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2016-11-26
IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-30
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has editorial nits that
should be fixed before publication.
Abstract:
Remove the word "extensively" from th
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2016-11-26
IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-30
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has editorial nits that
should be fixed
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-algo-06
Reviewer: Orit Levin
Review Date: 2016-10-17
IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-25
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary:
This short document intended to be "experimental" and it is well-written and
Thanks, Yoav!
This addresses all my comments.
Best,
Orit.
-Original Message-
From: Yoav Nir [mailto:ynir.i...@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, October 11, 2016 12:46 PM
To: Orit Levin
Cc: draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves@ietf.org; General Area Review Team
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04
Reviewer: Orit Levin (mailto:or...@microsoft.com)
Review Date: 2016-09-27
IETF LC End Date: 2016-09-29
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but ha
ght create confusion as I explained in my
original comments. I don't feel strongly about the exact way this comment gets
addressed, though.
Thanks,
Orit.
-Original Message-
From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.ar...@piuha.net]
Sent: Saturday, September 10, 2016 11:38 PM
To: Gonzalo C
September 09, 2016 2:18 PM
> To: Orit Levin ; Gonzalo Camarillo
> ; draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis@ietf.org
> Cc: General Area Review Team
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-12
>
> On 09/09/2016 02:02 PM, Orit Levin wrote:
> > Hi Tom, I am
----
Thanks!
Orit.
> -Original Message-
> From: Tom Henderson [mailto:t...@tomh.org]
> Sent: Tuesday, September 06, 2016 11:08 PM
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-12
Reviewer: Orit Levin (or...@microsoft.com)
Review Date: 2016-08-23
IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-25
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that sho
17 matches
Mail list logo
