Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-oauth-pop-architecture-07

2015-12-16 Thread Phil Hunt
Matt Thanks for the great review. As Kathleen mentioned, there are some other changes we have to make that will push the draft back. Never-the-less I will take into account all the reviewer comments in the next draft. All your comments seem very reasonable to me. Thanks, Phil > On Dec 17,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-scim-core-schema-17

2015-05-09 Thread Phil Hunt
dated draft inline below. > If you don't get around to generating a new draft before the telechat, I'll > send these as my telechat review. > > Regards, > Elwyn > > > On 20/04/2015 19:30, Phil Hunt wrote: >> Elwyn, >> >> Thanks for

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-scim-core-schema-17

2015-05-07 Thread Phil Hunt
Elwyn, Thanks for this. I think these changes are reasonable and strike a better balance on standardized canonicalization vs. providing allowance for discretion. I will add to the next update. Phil phil.h...@yahoo.com > On May 7, 2015, at 10:02 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > Hi, Phil. > > In

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-scim-core-schema-17

2015-05-06 Thread Phil Hunt
locales. But, as I said, this draft goes ahead as is on that front. > > There are some remaining minor comments on the updated draft inline below. > If you don't get around to generating a new draft before the telechat, I'll > send these as my telechat review. > &

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-scim-api-16.txt

2015-04-24 Thread Phil Hunt
Francis, Thanks again for the detailed review. Comments inline. If no comments, the changes have been made to the draft posted moments ago. I believe this should address all of your comments. Best regards, Phil phil.h...@yahoo.com > On Apr 22, 2015, at 8:06 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: > >

Re: [Gen-art] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-scim-core-schema-18.txt

2015-04-24 Thread Phil Hunt
The update below addresses comments received from the Gen-ART and IANA review. Many thanks to Elwyn and Amanda for their detailed feedback. Please let me know if this addresses your comments fully. Phil phil.h...@yahoo.com > On Apr 24, 2015, at 9:26 AM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > > >

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-scim-api-16.txt

2015-04-22 Thread Phil Hunt
Francis, Thanks for your detailed review. Much appreciated! I will revise the document as suggested in the coming week. Thanks! Phil Hunt > On Apr 22, 2015, at 08:06, Francis Dupont wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, pl

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art last call review of draft-ietf-scim-core-schema-17

2015-04-20 Thread Phil Hunt
Elwyn, Thanks for your careful and thorough review. I have included my comments below. Note, if I have not commented below, please assume I agree with your comment and will update the draft to include your feedback. Discussion inline below... Phil phil.h...@yahoo.com > On Apr 17, 2015, at 2