Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-05

2020-03-10 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi David, Thanks, the new text is clearer Roni > -Original Message- > From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Black, David > Sent: Tuesday, March 10, 2020 1:20 AM > To: Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: Black, David; last-c...@ietf.org; det...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-detn

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-guidelines-11

2020-02-24 Thread Roni Even (A)
Vijay thanks, The document will be published as an Informational RFC and not a proposed standard. Roni > -Original Message- > From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org] > Sent: Monday, February 24, 2020 6:45 PM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-multiplex-g

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-10 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Al, I am OK with all the changes Roni > -Original Message- > From: MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) [mailto:a...@research.att.com] > Sent: Wednesday, December 11, 2019 3:41 AM > To: Roni Even (A); gen-art@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; ali...@cooperw.in > Cc: i...@ietf.org; draft-i

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-09 Thread Roni Even (A)
C (AL) [mailto:a...@research.att.com] > Sent: Thursday, December 05, 2019 4:04 PM > To: Roni Even (A); gen-art@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org > Cc: i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry@ietf.org; Mirja > Kuehlewind; Alissa Cooper > Subject: RE: [ippm] Genart last call review of > dra

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-12-05 Thread Roni Even (A)
since the policy is specification required Roni Even > -Original Message- > From: Alissa Cooper [mailto:ali...@cooperw.in] > Sent: Wednesday, December 04, 2019 8:00 PM > To: Mirja Kuehlewind > Cc: Roni Even (A); MORTON, ALFRED C (AL); Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

2019-11-01 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Al, I saw that IANA was consulted during the work. I was wondering what will be the actual text that will be written in the IANA registry, I expected section 10 to describe it. Registration Procedure(s) Reference Note I am not sure yet what is the Registration Procedure and what will be writt

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme-10

2019-10-23 Thread Roni Even (A)
HI Rifaat, OK, no other comments Roni From: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef [mailto:rifaat.i...@gmail.com] Sent: Wednesday, October 23, 2019 3:25 PM To: Roni Even (A) Cc: Roni Even; last-c...@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; SIPCORE; draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme-10

2019-10-22 Thread Roni Even (A)
Rifaat thanks, See in line Roni On Tue, Oct 22, 2019 at 4:38 AM Roni Even via Datatracker mailto:nore...@ietf.org>> wrote: Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being p

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-05

2019-09-23 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Med, Thanks, I have no further comments Roni -Original Message- From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com [mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com] Sent: Monday, September 23, 2019 9:19 AM To: Roni Even (A); Jaime Jiménez; Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-core-hop-limit@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-05

2019-09-22 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi, I looked at section 5.4.6 and now I understand that the option is elective, non-repeatable and part of cache key. That will mean that the option number should have the two least significant bits as 0 and the next 3 bits some combination that is not all 1's, see also https://tools.ietf.org/ht

Re: [Gen-art] [ipwave] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-47

2019-07-17 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi, I still do not think that the following sentence in section 5.2 text "The policy dictating when the MAC address is changed on the 802.11-OCB interface is to-be-determined." make sense. I think that a sentence that will say “implementations should use a policy dictating when the MAC address is

Re: [Gen-art] [ipwave] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

2019-06-22 Thread Roni Even (A)
Inline From: Roni Even (A) [mailto:roni.e...@huawei.com] Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2019 1:41 AM To: dick...@alum.mit.edu<mailto:dick...@alum.mit.edu>; 'NABIL BENAMAR'; 'Roni Even' Cc: gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; &

Re: [Gen-art] [ipwave] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

2019-06-18 Thread Roni Even (A)
document. I also noticed that there is support in IEEE SA - 1609.4-2016 for MAC address change. Roni Even From: Dick Roy [mailto:dick...@alum.mit.edu] Sent: Monday, June 17, 2019 10:48 PM To: Roni Even (A); 'NABIL BENAMAR'; 'Roni Even' Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; 'IETF Discussio

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

2019-06-17 Thread Roni Even (A)
Thanks, The only comment left is: 2. In section 5.2 "The policy dictating when the MAC address is changed on the 802.11-OCB interface is to-be-determined.". Reading the next sentence it looks to me that this is needed as part of the solution and should not be left for the unknown future. Should w

Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

2019-03-28 Thread Roni Even (A)
Linda, The LC ended March 18, the Telechat is April 11th Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Linda Dunbar Sent: Thursday, March 28, 2019 11:17 AM To: maho...@nostrum.com; gen-art@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments Jean, I

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-27

2019-03-07 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Med, Thanks I am OK with your response only open one > administrator even if rejected. [Med] This is deployment-specific. For example, if conflict handling requires "notify an administrator for validation", there is no point to report again. [RE] Yes but for example "reject all" may cause a

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hollenbeck-vcarddav-icann-rdap-extensions-00

2019-02-05 Thread Roni Even (A)
Scott thanks for clarifying to me. I have no further comments Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Hollenbeck, Scott Sent: Monday, February 04, 2019 2:33 PM To: ron.even@gmail.com; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i...@ietf.org; draft-hollenbeck-vcar

Re: [Gen-art] [tram] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tram-stun-pmtud-09

2018-09-17 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Marc, Thanks, these changes address all my comments Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Marc Petit-Huguenin Sent: Monday, September 17, 2018 3:34 PM To: Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i...@ietf.org; t...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-tram-stun-pm

Re: [Gen-art] [Ext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis-11

2018-08-08 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Paul, I am OK with your response Thanks Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Paul Hoffman Sent: Wednesday, August 08, 2018 5:57 PM To: Roni Even Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; dn...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dnsop-terminology-bis@iet

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-meeting-policy-04

2018-04-25 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Suresh, The proposed text works for me. Regards Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Suresh Krishnan Sent: Thursday, April 26, 2018 2:28 AM To: Roni Even Cc: mtgve...@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-mtgvenue-meeting-

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27

2018-03-03 Thread Roni Even (A)
Hi Miika, All your responses are OK with me. As for posting a new version, I think it will be good to submit one with all the changes that came in the IETF LC Roni -Original Message- From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Miika Komu Sent: Thursday, March 01, 2018