Re: [Gen-art] [EXTERNAL] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13

2021-03-26 Thread Seitz Ludwig
Hello Elwyn, Thank you for you review. I have fixed the nit you pointed out in the new version of the draft (-14). /Ludwig > -Original Message- > From: Elwyn Davies via Datatracker > Sent: den 23 mars 2021 23:53 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: a...@ietf.org;

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-12

2020-08-03 Thread Seitz Ludwig
I support Steffi's suggestion (i.e. make it pop-only here and allow non-pop profiles in the framework). /Ludwig -Original Message- From: Stefanie Gerdes Sent: den 3 augusti 2020 16:18 To: Seitz Ludwig ; Benjamin Kaduk ; Paul Kyzivat Cc: draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize-12

2020-08-03 Thread Seitz Ludwig
> >> * Also in section 3.3.1: > >> > >> ... This > >> specification assumes that the access token is a PoP token as > >> described in [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] unless specifically stated > >> otherwise. > >> > >> I think "assumes ... unless" should be "MUST ... unless". > > >

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-06

2020-01-03 Thread Seitz Ludwig
Hello Elwyn, Sorry for being a pain. I have one more comment. /Ludwig (now finally from the corporate account) From: elwynd Sent: den 22 december 2019 19:27 To: Ludwig Seitz ; Elwyn Davies ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params@ietf.org; a...@ietf.org