Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

2015-11-20 Thread Simon Josefsson
Executive Summary: I have submitted https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-04 that (hopefully) resolve the gen-art and secdir feedback. Paul Kyzivat writes: > This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the > review. Hello Paul. I am sorry for the delay i

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-saml-08

2012-01-18 Thread Simon Josefsson
Ben Campbell writes: >> -- section 7 >> >> Does the GSS-API description introduce security considerations? If >> not, please say so. >> > > I did not see a response to this comment. I missed this in my last e-mail. I propose we add another sub-section of the security considerations like this

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-kitten-sasl-saml-06

2012-01-18 Thread Simon Josefsson
Ben Campbell writes: > -- section 4, 3rd and 4th paragraph (paragraph a and b) > > These seem like protocol affecting differences. If so, they need > elaboration, such as normative statements and formal definitions, or > references to such. > > -- section 5, general: > > The section seems to need

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-krb-wg-otp-preauth-18

2011-08-26 Thread Simon Josefsson
writes: > Some form of identifier will be required for the otp-algID in the > PA-OTP-CHALLENGE and the PA-OTP-REQUEST and from what I remember about > when this was first discussed, it was agreed that it would make sense > to use the registry of identifiers already being established for PSKC > ra

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-josefsson-pbkdf2-test-vectors

2010-09-14 Thread Simon Josefsson
Hi Kathleen, Thank you for the careful review. I have no objections to your proposed changes, and have merged them into my private copy. I've asked Sean whether I should submit a new document or wait until AUTH48 to fix this. Regards, /Simon writes: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for t

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-18

2010-01-08 Thread Simon Josefsson
Alexey Melnikov writes: >>The I-D says: >> >>The original >> GSS-API->SASL mechanism bridge was specified by [RFC], now >> [RFC4752]; we shall sometimes refer to the original bridge as GS1 in >> this document. >> >>I don't see

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-18

2010-01-08 Thread Simon Josefsson
Nicolas Williams writes: >> In particular, the current consensus of the SASL community appears to >> be that SASL "security layers" (i.e., confidentiality and integrity >> protection of application data after authentication) are too complex >> and, since SASL applications tend to have an

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-sasl-gs2-18

2010-01-08 Thread Simon Josefsson
"Spencer Dawkins" writes: > Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a Proposed > Standard. I did have one minor question about 13.3 (in my LATE > review), but it should not be difficult to resolve, if an AD agrees > with my question. Hi Spencer. Thank you for your careful revi

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt

2009-12-15 Thread Simon Josefsson
"Miguel A. Garcia" writes: > Summary: The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Thanks for review! > Nits/editorial comments: > > - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: SRP Fixed, thanks. > - Section 5, 6th paragraph: > > s/a list that map realm names/a lis

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sasl-scram-10

2009-10-20 Thread Simon Josefsson
Ben Campbell writes: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-josefsson-rfc3548bis-02

2006-04-19 Thread Simon Josefsson
Elwyn Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes: > Hi. > > Think we are almost done Yup. Thanks for following up on the review. /* Decode base64 encoded input array IN of length INLEN to output array OUT that can hold *OUTLEN bytes. Return true if decoding was success

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-josefsson-rfc3548bis-02

2006-04-18 Thread Simon Josefsson
Elwyn Davies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes: > I looked over the diff .. couple of notes below. > > Glad you trapped the test vector errors! Yup. Just checking if anyone was paying attention... :) > Simon Josefsson wrote: >> Hello Elwyn, and thanks for your care

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-art review of draft-josefsson-rfc3548bis-02

2006-04-18 Thread Simon Josefsson
Hello Elwyn, and thanks for your careful review! I have incorporated most of your suggestions (see below) and updated the document. The new document, with yours (and others) fixes, is available from: http://josefsson.org/base-encoding/draft-josefsson-rfc3548bis.txt The differences compared to t