Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pcp-port-set-10

2015-10-13 Thread Simon Perreault
Le 2015-10-12 01:49, Meral Shirazipour a écrit : > Minor issues: > -[Page 7], Section 4.1, "If the PCP Client does not know the exact number of > ports its requires, it MAY then set the Port Set Size to 0x, indicating > that it is willing to accept as many ports as the PCP server can offer."

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tram-auth-problems-02

2014-07-27 Thread Simon Perreault
Le 2014-07-26 11:00, Brian E Carpenter a écrit : Problem 6 (Hosting multiple realms on a single IP address is challenging...) doesn't really seem to be a problem with authentication as such, so while it's clearly a problem, is it in scope? It isn't quite clear to me that there's a security

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tram-auth-problems-02

2014-07-27 Thread Simon Perreault
On 27 juillet 2014 16:40:40 HAE, Brian E Carpenter brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com wrote: Bonjour Simon, On 28/07/2014 03:09, Simon Perreault wrote: Le 2014-07-26 11:00, Brian E Carpenter a écrit : Problem 6 (Hosting multiple realms on a single IP address is challenging...) doesn't really seem

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07

2012-07-07 Thread Simon Perreault
On 07/03/12 05:51, Eggert, Lars wrote: On Jul 3, 2012, at 14:24, Alexey Melnikov wrote: I found it is to be odd to have a requirements document as a BCP, but I am sure you can sort the right status out with IESG. +1 I fail to see why Informational wouldn't be the better status. I don't

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

2011-05-26 Thread Simon Perreault
On 2011-05-24 15:42, Russ Housley wrote: Sorry for the delayed response. I would prefer the use of confidentiality instead of privacy in the paragraph. That would better align with the definitions in RFC 2828. I'll make the change. Thanks, Simon -- DTN made easy, lean, and smart --

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

2011-04-11 Thread Simon Perreault
On 2011-04-09 08:03, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote: The last is not a Gen-ART, but was put there for adding considerations to the security section. I just meant that it should state that there may be privacy concerns with some of the information. I listed the regulations to give examples,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

2011-04-11 Thread Simon Perreault
On 2011-04-11 09:42, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote: Thank you for the update. How about the following which slightly changes your proposed text: o vCards often carry information that can be sensitive (e.g. birthday, address, and phone information). Although vCards have no

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

2011-04-09 Thread Simon Perreault
On 04/08/2011 11:21 PM, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote: Section 3.2, paragraph 2: It reads as a 4 element list instead of 2, here is one option: Change from: (space, ASCII decimal 32, or horizontal tab, ASCII decimal 9). To: (space (ASCII decimal 32) or horizontal tab (ASCII decimal 9)).

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review: draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardxml-08

2011-04-09 Thread Simon Perreault
On 04/08/2011 05:45 PM, Mary Barnes wrote: Major issue: - The document is listed as Standards Track but but does not contain the RFC 2119 boilerplate. There is some RFC 2119 terminology used, however, there seems to be a lot of cases where RFC 2119 language is appropriate but not used. Right.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-behave-turn-ipv6-09

2010-04-01 Thread Simon Perreault
McCann Peter-A001034 wrote, on 01/04/10 11:16 AM: TURN can run over UDP and TCP, as it allows for a client to request address/port pairs for receiving both UDP and TCP. Should say and instead of as. Will be fixed. Thanks for the review! Simon -- NAT64/DNS64 open-source --