Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-lsn-deployment-04

2014-01-22 Thread Victor Kuarsingh
your recommended text on redundancy model. regards, Victor K On Thu, Jan 16, 2014 at 1:33 PM, Martin Thomson martin.thom...@gmail.comwrote: On 15 January 2014 19:40, Victor Kuarsingh vic...@jvknet.com wrote: Which seems wise given their somewhat contentious nature

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-lsn-deployment-04

2014-01-22 Thread Victor Kuarsingh
Martin, I am loading a new new version today, but here is that section (originally called Motivation) for quick review. ** Beginning of section ** Existing Network Considerations (new name of section) The selection of CGN may be made by an operator based on a number of factors. The overall

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-lsn-deployment-04

2014-01-21 Thread Victor Kuarsingh
Jari/Martin, With respect to section 6, I agree we can remove the odd text and I will follow Martin's suggestion. The inclusion of that text was a bit historical as the document was actual first drafted before RFC6598. I would agree that (as this point) that text, as I have in the document,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-lsn-deployment-04

2014-01-15 Thread Victor Kuarsingh
Martin, My responses in-line On Mon, Jan 6, 2014 at 1:44 PM, Martin Thomson martin.thom...@gmail.comwrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-lsn-deployment-04

2014-01-15 Thread Victor Kuarsingh
Benoit/Martin, I apologize. I seem to have missed reading that email. I review and replay. regards, Victor K On Tue, Jan 14, 2014 at 12:10 PM, Benoit Claise bcla...@cisco.com wrote: Dear authors, doc. shepherd, Can you please answer Martin. Regards, Benoit I am the assigned Gen-ART