Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-04

Christer, I have deleted the issues not under discussion. More comments, indented, below... > On Feb 1, 2017, at 5:57 PM, Christer Holmberg > wrote: > > Hi, > >> >>> Q3:In the Introduction, I suggest adding a reference to the first >>> occurrences

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-04

> On Feb 1, 2017, at 4:36 PM, Jari Arkko wrote: > > Thanks for your review, Christer! > > Authors, can you make a note of the editorials? Yes, I have agreed to make all of the changes suggested by Christer. Thanks -- Kim > > Jari > > On 01 Feb

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-04

Christer, Thanks for your review. I will make all of the changes that you suggest, and have offered details (indented) below. Note that while I'm willing to make the change you have discussed in Q3, I don't actually understand what you would like us to do. More below... > On Feb 1, 2017, at