Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-12

On 05/12/2021 22:49, Dale R. Worley wrote: t petch writes: I think that your comments are excellent as comments on a isolated I-D but might not be such an improvement for the set of six (or seven or eight) that I reference. When these I-D first appeared, there was a debate on the WG list

Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-12

On 02/12/2021 03:22, Dale R. Worley wrote: Addressing what seems to be the difficult issue: t petch writes: The trouble with the way that Last Call is organised is that the changes suggested below will pull this I-D out of line with the others potentially leading to contradiction and

Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-12

On 28/11/2021 23:03, Dale Worley via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] [Netconf] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-15

Kent Yes, good now, Tom Petch - Original Message - From: "Kent Watsen" Sent: Monday, August 01, 2016 10:17 PM > > To address the Gen-Art comment, below I replaced “as defined in [RFC5246]” with “, as described in Section 7.2.1 of [RFC5246]”. Good now? > > Additionally, while looking

Re: [Gen-art] [Netconf] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-15

Robert Picking up on the point about terminating the connection when a certificate validation fails, this is a straight lift from 'Netconf over TLS', RFC7589, where the reference is also in Section 4 which makes it clear (to me:-) that the reference is to how the connection is terminated, as per

Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05

- Original Message - From: "Christer Holmberg" To: Cc: Sent: Saturday, April 11, 2015 2:07 PM I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-s