Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-13

2023-12-14 Thread tom petch
lane." and Greg has said he will fix that so I think that there is now no problem. The I-D uses d-ACH elsewhere to refer to the Header and not the channel. Tom petch /Loa > > RFC7214 reorganised the IANA registres and gets the name right and may be the > best reference. > >

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-oam-13

2023-12-13 Thread tom petch
any more, it is G-ACh RFC5586 still uses G-ACH RFC7214 reorganised the IANA registres and gets the name right and may be the best reference. I am not sure where G-ACh first appeared but it was much dicussed in and around MPLS-TP, Loa might know or else Adrian. Tom Petch Sent via a website that tra

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-17

2022-01-26 Thread tom petch
ay depend on whether or not this RFC is made Normative. And the TLP in the YANG module is out of date Tom Petch On 25/01/2022 10:26, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General A

Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] some YANG thoughts on draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03

2022-01-04 Thread tom petch
From: Eliot Lear Sent: Tuesday, January 04, 2022 16:28 To: tom petch; gen-art@ietf.org; Russ Housley Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access@ietf.org; ops...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] some YANG thoughts on draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03 Hi Tom, Thanks for your review. Please see below

[Gen-art] some YANG thoughts on draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03

2021-12-14 Thread tom petch
h expanded abbreviations Why have a grouping and a uses which for me makes the module harder to understand? It is not as if this grouping is going to be imported in lots of places AFAICT. Tom Petch Major Concerns: Section 1 says: To satisfy these two key use cases, objects may be found in one o

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Antw: [EXT] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-12

2021-02-15 Thread tom petch
been folded to fit the rules of the RFC Editor but YANG/XML does not want them folded. This is usually accompanied with a reference to draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding RFC8792 Tom Petch Regards, Ulrich ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@iet

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

2019-10-29 Thread tom petch
.14 - Security Consideratrions does not include the required YANG considerations which in turn generates further Normative References - Appendix A /The secification/The specification/ Tom Petch - Original Message - From: "tom petch" To: "Michael Richardson" Cc

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

2019-10-29 Thread tom petch
seeing if I can switch from ietf to Last Call inline Tom Petch - Original Message - From: "Michael Richardson" Sent: Monday, October 28, 2019 10:06 PM > tom petch wrote: > > Looking some more at this I-D, I have more concerns about the YANG > > modu

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

2019-10-18 Thread tom petch
cification/ Sorry for the bitty postings; more haste less speed. Tom Petch - Original Message - From: "tom p." To: "Alissa Cooper" ; "Dan Romascanu" Cc: ; ; ; Sent: Friday, October 18, 2019 1:11 PM Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ie

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

2019-10-18 Thread tom petch
e-mail addresses for the YANG module are the same as those for the YANG module in RFC8366; I do not know which are correct. contact "WG Web: <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/anima/> should be https: and usually points to datatracker.ietf.org not tools Tom Petch - Original Message

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

2019-10-15 Thread tom petch
Dan I had a quick look at the YANG and it does indeed need some work IMHO. I have posted a separate e-mail listing what I saw. Tom Petch - Original Message - From: "Dan Romascanu via Datatracker" Sent: Sunday, October 13, 2019 9:39 AM > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Revi