Hello Elwyn, Thank you for you review. I have fixed the nit you pointed out in the new version of the draft (-14).
/Ludwig > -----Original Message----- > From: Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > Sent: den 23 mars 2021 23:53 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: a...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params....@ietf.org; > last-c...@ietf.org > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params- > 13 > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2021-03-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-13 > IESG Telechat date: 2021-03-25 > > Summary: > Ready for publication with the wxcption of one very minor nit. Thanks for > responding to my previous review. > > Major issues: > None > > Minor issues: > None > > Nits/editorial comments: > s5: This section cover current usage. s1 anticipates the specifications > mught > find other usages, so... OLD: The confirmation method parameters are used > as > follows: NEW: The confirmation method parameters are used in [I-D.ietf-ace- > oauth-authz] as follows; it is anticipated that they may be used, potentially > differently, in other profiles or protocols: END > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
