Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

2023-06-01 Thread Lucas Pardue
Hi Rob, On Thu, 1 Jun 2023, 23:12 Rob Sayre, wrote: > Hi, > > I put up a PR: > https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561 > > The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English, > but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the > passive

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

2023-06-01 Thread Rob Sayre
Hi, I put up a PR: https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561 The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English, but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the passive voice in an unidiomatic way. I'm not attached to my suggestion, but

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

2023-05-25 Thread Lars Eggert
Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Mar 18, 2023, at 05:02, Joel Halpern via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >