Hello Robert, all, Thank you for this review. Much appreciated. As I understand it, there are no major issues to address?
If it is alright with you (& with our AD), We propose to fold the "nits" (as you call them) that you found in with a couple of "nits" raised by Alvaro already, and with whatever else the ongoing LC raises, and spin a revision capturing it all when the LC is closed? Thanks again for your help, Thomas -- Thomas Heide Clausen • @thclausen • thomasclausen.org www.arkko.com/tools/allstats/thomasheideclausen.html > On 8 Aug 2016, at 17:17, Robert Sparks <rjspa...@nostrum.com> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART and secdir reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG > for the IETF Chair. The secdir does the same for the security area directors. > Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > For more information on Gen-Art, please see the FAQ at > <https://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > For moe information on secdir, see the wiki at > <https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/sec/trac/wiki/SecDirReview> > > Document: draft-ietf-manet-smf-sec-threats-05 > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review Date: 8 Aug 2016 > IETF LC End Date: 11 Aug 2016 > IESG Telechat date: 18 Aug 2016 > > Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC > > This draft provides a discussion of vulnerabilities in Simplified Multicast > Forwarding (SMF), focusing on attacking the Duplicate Packet Detection and > Relay Set Selection mechanisms. It positions itself as being useful > information > for those deploying SMF as currently defined. It does not propose > mitigations, > but does have a section that identifies potential future work that might. > > I have sent several editorial nits directly to the authors. > > _______________________________________________ > manet mailing list > ma...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/manet
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