I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext-11 Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 2014-04-09 IETF LC End Date: 2014-04-15 IESG Telechat date: none yet Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Nice job. Obsessive copyeditor nit: The sections on sub-TLVs in 3.3 all begin with "The ___ Sub-TLV is depicted below, this sub-TLV ...". You should end a sentence after "below" and begin a new one with "This". Scott _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
