I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sipping-rtcp-summary-08 Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: February 13, 2010 IETF LC End Date: February 16, 2010 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Comments: I accumulated some questions as I read the draft, but they were all answered by the time I reached the end. I only have a few editorial comments for you: 3.1 Subscribe/Notify Method > Configuration of an address of the COLLECTOR is not needed as > explained below. Immediately below is the PUBLISH method, but I doubt that "below" is referring to that, and otherwise this reference is not clear. Where specifically is it explained that configuration of an address is not needed? 3.4 Overload Avoidance Some small things: Typo: "MUST send a 503 Service Unavailable or other 5xx esponse" "on these responses and respect the retry after time interval." -- I would make it Retry-After. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
