Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-12-13 Thread Chris Lilley
On 2016-12-09 21:42:58, Dale R. Worley wrote: But I see a technical issue: RFC 6838 section 4.3 seems to leave parameter values to be case-sensitive, so if you want them to be case-insensitive, you are going to have to put that in the draft. Chris Lilley:  In fact I misunderstood your original c

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-12-09 Thread Dale R. Worley
My apologies; I should have responded quicker on this. But I don't think there are any comments here that affect the draft. The various wording matters I've not reviewed carefully, as I've already pointed out my questions and I'll defer to the authors on their resolution. But I see a technical i

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-12-08 Thread Chris Lilley
On 2016-10-30 18:18:29, Dale R. Worley wrote: 7.1. Generic SFNT font type I can see why a comma-separated list is necessary, but that means that "Values: TTF, CFF, SVG" is not strictly correct. Perhaps something like the following (and let IANA figure out how to express that in http://www.iana.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-12-08 Thread Chris Lilley
On 2016-10-30 18:18:29, Dale R. Worley wrote: 7.5. WOFF 1.0 Macintosh Universal Type Identifier code: "org.w3c.woff" Is this part of a media type registration? (If so, is it required for all "font" subtypes?) Chris Lilley:  I opened an issue on Macintosh type codes: https://github.com/svgeesu

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-11-15 Thread Chris Lilley
On 2016-10-30 18:17, Dale R. Worley wrote: The current RFC Editor preference seems to be that section titles should capitalize the first and "important" words. Some of the section titles adhere to this format but the following ones do not: 1. Specification development 4. Security

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-10-30 Thread Chris Lilley
Dale, Thank you for your detailed and thorough review. On a first reading, most of these look to be trivial to address. For those few that are not, I will open issues so that they can be discussed. On 2016-10-30 18:17, Dale R. Worley wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.

[Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-justfont-toplevel-03

2016-10-30 Thread Dale R. Worley
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at