Thanks, Brian.
- Ralph
On Sep 17, 2010, at 6:09 AM 9/17/10, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
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I would suggest repeating the second paragraph of the Abstract
at the start of the Introduction. It's really important that readers
understand that this is a publication for the record.
Makes sense. I have added this to my copy.
Jari
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