Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04.txt

2010-09-17 Thread Ralph Droms
Thanks, Brian. - Ralph On Sep 17, 2010, at 6:09 AM 9/17/10, Brian E Carpenter wrote: draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04-carpenter.txt ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04.txt

2010-09-16 Thread Brian E Carpenter
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04.txt

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-townsley-coexistence-04.txt

2010-09-16 Thread Jari Arkko
I would suggest repeating the second paragraph of the Abstract at the start of the Introduction. It's really important that readers understand that this is a publication for the record. Makes sense. I have added this to my copy. Jari ___ Gen-art