Vijay K. Gurbani wrote:
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: None.
Nits/editorial comments:
1) S3.1
s/VPIM [RFC3801] such as/VPIM [RFC3801], such as/
2) Figure 5, in the legend:
s/bpxes/boxes
cool. thanks!
d/
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