On 2011-05-24 15:42, Russ Housley wrote:
Sorry for the delayed response. I would prefer the use of confidentiality
instead of privacy in the paragraph. That would better align with the
definitions in RFC 2828.
I'll make the change.
Thanks,
Simon
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To: Moriarty, Kathleen
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev
On 2011-04-09 08:03, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:
The last is not a Gen-ART, but was put
there for adding considerations
On 2011-04-09 08:03, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:
The last is not a Gen-ART, but was put
there for adding considerations to the security section. I just
meant that it should state that there may be privacy concerns with
some of the information. I listed the regulations to give examples,
, 2011 9:17 AM
To: Moriarty, Kathleen
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev
On 2011-04-09 08:03, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:
The last is not a Gen-ART, but was put
there for adding
On 2011-04-11 09:42, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:
Thank you for the update. How about the following which slightly changes
your proposed text:
o vCards often carry information that can be sensitive (e.g.
birthday, address, and phone information). Although vCards have no
On 04/08/2011 11:21 PM, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:
Section 3.2, paragraph 2:
It reads as a 4 element list instead of 2, here is one option:
Change from: (space, ASCII decimal 32, or horizontal tab, ASCII decimal 9).
To: (space (ASCII decimal 32) or horizontal tab (ASCII decimal 9)).
] On Behalf Of
Simon Perreault
Sent: Saturday, April 09, 2011 6:51 AM
To: Moriarty, Kathleen
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev
On 04/08/2011 11:21 PM, kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote:
Section
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.
Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev
Reviewer:
