Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-rfc7315-updates

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-rfc7315-updates

Hi Ralph, ... >Yes. I had missed that 3.3.2 and 3.3.3 come from 3GPP. The doc makes perfect >sense to me now. > >Thanks for the clarification and I think the doc is ready for publication >considering our agreement on the editorial nits. Thank You! :) Regards, Christer Nits/editorial

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-rfc7315-updates

> On Jul 12, 2016, at 7:41 AM 7/12/16, Christer Holmberg > wrote: > > Hi Ralph, > > Thanks for your comments! Please see inline. > > Minor issues: > > > I had some difficulty unraveling the relationship among the text in section > > 3.3.2, 3.3.3, 4 and RFC

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-rfc7315-updates

Hi Ralph, Thanks for your comments! Please see inline. Minor issues: > I had some difficulty unraveling the relationship among the text in section > 3.3.2, 3.3.3, 4 and RFC 7315. Section 3.3.2 specifies the > inclusion of the NPLI option in the P-Access-Network-Info header field. > Section

[Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-rfc7315-updates

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