Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

2016-01-06 Thread Thomas Haynes
> On Jan 5, 2016, at 6:07 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > Hi, Tom. > > The existence of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530-migration-update was pointed out to > me this evening. After a cursory read I realised that SETCLIENTID had been > MNI'd in 4.1 so that there is a minor

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

2016-01-05 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi, Tom. The existence of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530-migration-update was pointed out to me this evening. After a cursory read I realised that SETCLIENTID had been MNI'd in 4.1 so that there is a minor infelicity in the comments in minorversion2-dot-x (and in 4.1). The comment here: ///

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

2015-12-18 Thread Tom Haynes
> On Dec 17, 2015, at 12:09 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > Hi, Tom. > > Excellent... so I think we are done with dot-x. > > One additional point that I was going to write into the main minorversion2 > review relating to referencing the requirements RFC 7204.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

2015-12-17 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi, Tom. Excellent... so I think we are done with dot-x. One additional point that I was going to write into the main minorversion2 review relating to referencing the requirements RFC 7204. rpcsec-gssv3 also references the requirements RFC but the amount of info that is needful to support

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

2015-12-16 Thread Tom Haynes
> On Dec 13, 2015, at 4:44 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any

[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

2015-12-13 Thread Elwyn Davies
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