Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

Thanks for your review, Robert and the changes, Tal! Jari On 16 Sep 2015, at 14:38, Robert Sparks wrote: > Sorry - I didn't pick that up when I looked at the graphic -05 to -08 diff. > This text is ok, especially given (ii). > > RjS > > On 9/16/15 1:29 AM, Tal Mizrahi

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

Hi Robert, > The document doesn't reflect the email discussion we had around how > certain 3rd parties can cancel commands. I encourage adding at least a > sentence reminding implementers and experimenting operators to remember > that they can. Based on this email discussion we have added the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

Sorry - I didn't pick that up when I looked at the graphic -05 to -08 diff. This text is ok, especially given (ii). RjS On 9/16/15 1:29 AM, Tal Mizrahi wrote: Hi Robert, > The document doesn't reflect the email discussion we had around how > certain 3rd parties can cancel commands. I

[Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

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