Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14

Thanks, Teemu. I'll keep a look out for version 15. cheers, Elwyn On 15/07/2015 06:43, Savolainen Teemu (Nokia-TECH/Tampere) wrote: Hi Elwyn, Thank you for your review. s3, para 2: s/inter- peripheral/inter-peripheral/ [Remove one space] I didn't see space in XML version or latest output f

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14

Hi Elwyn, Thank you for your review. >s3, para 2: s/inter- peripheral/inter-peripheral/ [Remove one space] I didn't see space in XML version or latest output from xml2rfc, so don't know why it has been there.. >s3.2.2, last para: "(see Section 3.2.2)" is self-referential! I think you >mean

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14

Elwyn: Many thanks for your detailed review. And thanks all for the changes for the previous version of the review. Jari On 07 Jul 2015, at 11:22, Elwyn Davies wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.i

[Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14.