Avshalom - Thanks for performing a review of this document. All of the changes
you have suggested will be made in a -18 update when I'm cleared to do so by my
AD (Gonzalo). Please see my responses inline below to each specific item for
the details, FYI.
Regards
Jason
On 2/2/11 8:47 AM, "Avsha
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
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