Thanks, Robert
Detailed replies for your comments below inline.
It should resolve all your concerns.
These have been integrated into draft rev -12
which the authors feel is ready for RFC editor.
Full diff from -11 to -12:
http://tools.ietf.org//rfcdiff?url1=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits
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