Thank you Marco. Those changes address my comments and I think make the
document clearer.Yours,JoelSent via the Samsung Galaxy S20 FE 5G, an AT 5G
smartphone
Original message From: Marco Tiloca Date:
11/23/23 10:25 AM (GMT-05:00) To: Joel Halpern ,
gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
Hello Joel,
Thanks a lot for your review! Please find in line below our detailed
replies to your comments.
A Github PR where we have addressed your comments is available at
[GENART-PR].
Unless any concern is raised, we plan to soon merge this PR (and the
other ones related to other
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Issues
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