Greg,
“PAM Framework” sounds fine. And I’m happy with the rest of the
document. Thank you again for considering my input.
Kind regards,
-Peter
On 10/18/23, 6:53 PM, "Greg Mirsky" wrote:
Hi Peter,
Hi Peter,
thank you for your kind consideration of my notes. I have added a few new
notes below under the GIM2>> tag. Attached, is the diff highlighting the
updates resulting from our discussion.
Regards,
Greg
On Fri, Oct 13, 2023 at 9:13 AM wrote:
> Greg,
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> Thanks for considering my
Greg,
Thanks for considering my review comments. My responses to specific points are
found below.
Kind regards,
-Peter
From: Greg Mirsky
Sent: Wednesday, October 11, 2023 1:54 AM
To: Peter Yee
Cc: gen-art ;
Hi Peter,
thank you for your thorough review and detailed comments. Please find my
notes below under the GIM>> tag. I've attached the diff highlighting all
the updates.
Regards,
Greg
On Tue, Oct 10, 2023 at 5:42 AM Peter Yee via Datatracker
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> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review result: Ready
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Issues
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