[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-02-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-04-03 Thread Alissa Cooper
Dan, thanks for your review. I agree with your point about normatively referencing RFC 6275; I think your other points may be taken up at the authors’ discretion. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Feb 26, 2018, at 12:01 PM, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-04-30 Thread Ole Troan
Hi Dan, Thank you very much for the thorough review. Apologies for the delay. Procrastination and holiday came in the way. See below. > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews a

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-04-30 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Ole, Thanks for addressing my comments. All your answers to the minor and editorial comments that I made are are fine with me. Regards, Dan On Mon, Apr 30, 2018 at 5:10 PM, Ole Troan wrote: > Hi Dan, > > Thank you very much for the thorough review. > Apologies for the delay. Procrastinati

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-04-30 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 01/05/2018 02:10, Ole Troan wrote: >> 4. Section 4 - It would be good to capitalize Standards Action, and refer to >> RFC 8126 as reference (also to be added) > > Capitalisation done. > I ended up leaning towards not referencing 8126. As most documents with IANA > considerations don't. To

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-05-01 Thread Ole Troan
Brian, >>> 4. Section 4 - It would be good to capitalize Standards Action, and refer to >>> RFC 8126 as reference (also to be added) >> >> Capitalisation done. >> I ended up leaning towards not referencing 8126. As most documents with IANA >> considerations don't. To be consistent. > > Really?