Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

Hi Ralph, Please see inline [TR] From: Ralph Droms [mailto:rdroms.i...@gmail.com] Sent: Thursday, September 1, 2016 4:36 PM To: Jari Arkko Cc: Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) ; draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery@ietf.org; Review Area

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

RI just completed a quick review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08. The DNS Service Discovery section is much improved. I have a couple of comments on the revised text: I suggest adding a reference to the IANa "Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry",

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

Ralph, Tiru — thanks for the updates and the review. I’ve looked at the change draft and I think it is fine now. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

From: Ralph Droms [mailto:rdroms.i...@gmail.com] Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2016 6:34 AM To: Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) Cc: Review Area gen-art@ietf.org Team ; draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery@ietf.org; IETF discussion list

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

Tiru - thanks for advising me of your responses to the points in my review. Do you and the other authors have any thoughts about my recommendations for section 5? - Ralph > On Aug 17, 2016, at 11:24 AM 8/17/16, Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy) > wrote: > > Hi Ralph, > >

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

Hi Ralph, Thanks for the review. Please see inline. > -Original Message- > From: Ralph Droms [mailto:rdroms.i...@gmail.com] > Sent: Wednesday, August 10, 2016 2:58 AM > To: Review Area gen-art@ietf.org Team > Cc: draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery@ietf.org; IETF

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-tram-turn-server-discovery-08

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