Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

2016-10-12 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 10/12/16 12:55 AM, Eggert, Lars wrote: Hi, thanks for the review! On 2016-10-11, at 21:21, Paul Kyzivat wrote: (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but it has been removed.) I think this can be addressed by an RFC Editor Note. Sure. (2) NIT: unli

Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

2016-10-11 Thread Eggert, Lars
Hi, thanks for the review! On 2016-10-11, at 21:21, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but > it has been removed.) I think this can be addressed by an RFC Editor Note. > (2) NIT: unlinked references > > I found a number of cases wh

[Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

2016-10-11 Thread Paul Kyzivat
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